Self-introdution (Formal Letter)
Dear Professor,
My name is Elise Chang, and I am writing this email as an introduction to get to understand me better. I have previously completed a Diploma in Aeronautical and Aerospace Technology in Nanyang Polytechnic, and I am currently pursuing a Degree in Mechanical Engineering in SIT. With my interest in designing and developing, coupled with the fact that mechanical engineering is a broad engineering discipline, I decided on this degree as I felt that I will be able to venture into a broad spectrum of employment opportunities as well.
As I prepare myself to enter the workforce, one essential skill to possess is communication. Personally, I have always struggled with verbally expressing myself, especially in front of bigger groups, for the fear that I might in turn embarrass myself. I may even get anxious over a situation as small as a group project where sharing my ideas is necessary. Working on being able to collect my thoughts and fluently vocalise them is something that I am still working on and hope to achieve one day. That being said, one of the things I bring is my written communication, where I am able to actively listen and gather the thoughts of everyone on the table and put it into a clear and concise manner. This is often useful when writing reports for a project.
Through this module, I hope to be able to be more
confident in my ideas such that I can comfortably share and express myself. I also
hope to be better at performing under pressure and be able to communicate my
thoughts more efficiently while keeping it concise when speaking to a larger
audience.
Yours Sincerely,
Elise Chang
Hi Elise, great letter that you have written about yourself. Some feedbacks I have is that the capitalization of words for example diploma in aeronautical and aerospace technology. Other than that the rest seems good to me.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing about yourself. I like how you expressed both your strengths and weaknesses, allowing readers to understand more about yourself.
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